By Rebecca
Hoffman (heresagem)
2/23
I was
hungry, but a picnic seemed like a lot of trouble for a meal. I looked
down at my daughters face, willing myself to not crumble at the sight of
her pleading expression. I couldn’t do it. The doe eyes, comical pout
and picnic basket in her hand were impossible to resist, but what sealed
the deal was the angelic glow of sunshine on her blonde head. It was
the perfect day for a picnic.
We had
heard about a great picnic spot from some friends, talk of this spot is
what had put the idea of a picnic in her head several days ago. There
was a grassy bank by a small pond with ducks to chase and trees for
shade. Just follow the trail map, they said, it’s not too hard to find.
We drove to
the park nearby and quickly found the trail map by a cluster of trees
and bushes. Entry to the trail was obvious, but the view from there was
obstructed, so the map was crucial. The main trail set off to the left
and crossed over a stream just a short way out. Follow the stream to the
left and it lead to what looked like a pond. This must be our trail.
There was also a small trail off to the right which met back up with the
stream and the main trail, cutting the trail loop in half. Hmmm…
The main
trail was the obvious choice. Why would it be the most popular route to
travel if it did not lead to the best spot? We passed the little trail
on the right. It was rugged and shady; it turned downhill fast, so it
was impossible to get a good view of where it led. The main trail,
however, was wide open and led uphill into the warm sunshine. We started
out. Before long, the sun’s warmth began to burn. Gnats began to get in
our eyes and we figured we must be near water. We continue to follow
the trail markers and sure enough, within minutes we were crossing a
stream… if you could call it that. Hidden in a thicket of trees and
bushes, the water was a mere trickle, the mud dark and deep. A few water
bottles were hung up by a rock, tossed by hikers with little regard for
the ugliness of litter. The coolness of the shade was refreshing, but
the smell of stale water and mud did not invite us to stay.
We crossed
the rickety wooden bridge and were excited to be nearing the pond, but
our excitement faded fast. The trees cleared, but our feet were in mud.
The trail led to a mass of reeds and more mud. The pond. We had arrived.
Tummies grumbling, foreheads covered in sweat, we looked at the trail
with trepidation. Do we REALLY want to keep going?, my daughter asks.
Let’s just go back to the car and eat, she suggests, the look of bitter
disappointment on her face.
Off to the
right I spot what appears to be a trail. It is unmarked and shaded by
trees, so it is impossible to see where it leads. Could this be the
small trail that cuts the trail loop in half? Should we try it? Why not –
we don’t have much to lose. My daughter and I reluctantly head down the
narrow trail, hoping it doesn’t lead to a dead end, hoping it will get
us to the car quickly so that we can finally eat. After pushing our way
past a scraggly bush or two, the trail opens up and the sun beams down.
There, directly in front of us, is a grassy area with a small pond… or
is it a stream? Ducks sit in the shade of a nearby tree and a hawk calls
out from the sky. Smiles spread across our faces and my daughter runs
out onto the grass laughing. Here it is! Right here! Right down that
little unmarked trail!
We spread
out our picnic blanket and dive into our feast. Peanut butter and jelly
sandwiches and bananas have never tasted so good. As soon as we are done
eating, my daughter runs off to feed breadcrumbs to the ducks, and I
stretch out my legs in the sunshine. THIS is what we needed. A quiet
little picnic, just the two of us. Sunshine and ducks and puffy white
clouds to watch. It couldn’t be more perfect. As I tell myself our
adventurous little hike was worth it, my eyes scan the trees along the
stream. There, just a ways out to the right, is a trail marker. There is
a small trail, but I can’t tell where it goes… it’s hidden by trees. I
lie down on my back and close my eyes to the sun and I hear the faint
sound of a car door and children’s voices. I look back toward the trail
marker and I know… we must be near the parking lot.
This
perfect little picnic spot was right at the beginning of the trail,
right down the small trail, hidden by trees.
8 comments:
Well sometimes it's not about the destination , but the journey and sounds like you had an adventure with it
Funny though how the perfect solution can sometimes be right under our very noses!
This fictional story is intended as a metaphor for life... the paths we choose and the journeys they take us on.
Fabulous post! I absolutely adored it!
Avery
I loved this when you submitted it and still do :-)
Thanks guys! :)
Paul, you nailed it! It's all about the journey... but when you end up close to where you started in the first place it just makes you go "HMMMMM... there's a lesson here, somewhere!"
It's similar to The Alchemist in that respect, when the protagonist finds his destined "treasure" is right where he always was all along, but he wouldn't have come to appreciate it if not for his long, exotic, and challenging journey. (sorry if that was a spoiler for anyone who hasn't read it...it's worth reading anyway!)
Beautifully written post--painted clear images in my mind that readily invited me into the forest with your characters!
It's hard to see the beautiful things all around you when you're always looking for them somewhere else.
Rebecca, I was going to say this sounds like a metaphor for life, and it looks like that is what you intended. Here's to forging our own trails!
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